Forget the reader, it might confuse the writer. I don't wanna have to go through a list of all my changes every time I wanna try and make sense of what's going on.
So... yeah, I think going with the flow might be better? It'll make more sense, at least. [A beat.] Which means this meeting is pointless. Well, show's over, everybody go home! [She raises her cup to her lips and drains the whole remaining glass of lemonade theatrically, before grinning at him.] You're pretty good at this, y'know.
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So... yeah, I think going with the flow might be better? It'll make more sense, at least. [A beat.] Which means this meeting is pointless. Well, show's over, everybody go home! [She raises her cup to her lips and drains the whole remaining glass of lemonade theatrically, before grinning at him.] You're pretty good at this, y'know.